We shared our indie band creation with the class, allowing us to gain feedback and see what people thought worked well, and what not so well....
Indie Band Construction Feedback: Really good detail.Well selected quotes and videos.Picking out key details in bold is a really nice touch.Could maybe do with some background profile on the band as well as just how they would acheive success.The layout could be better - pictures/videos jumbled with the writing.Good idea with the key details in bold.Good depth of detail and the videos relate well.Very detailed.Nice idea and layout.Analyse the video examples to include more terminology.Good.Precise detail with all aspects.Inventive band name.Why have they gone mainstream?
Indie Band Construction Feedback: Really good detail.Well selected quotes and videos.Picking out key details in bold is a really nice touch.Could maybe do with some background profile on the band as well as just how they would acheive success.The layout could be better - pictures/videos jumbled with the writing.Good idea with the key details in bold.Good depth of detail and the videos relate well.Very detailed.Nice idea and layout.Analyse the video examples to include more terminology.Good.Precise detail with all aspects.Inventive band name.Why have they gone mainstream?
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